Review for Lead In Fidget Spinners: A Dizzying Decision for Target by Elizabeth Jones (June 7, 2019)
Review Comments
This project will require significant work to get it ready for publication. I hope these comments will point the authors toward a stronger product. Once these critical issues are fixed, I'll be better able to suggest refinements, but at this point, the structural issues must take priority.
This project will require significant work to get it ready for publication. I hope these comments will point the authors toward a stronger product. Once these critical issues are fixed, I'll be better able to suggest refinements, but at this point, the structural issues must take priority.